tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6780938908699637884.post4836130496127701483..comments2010-03-01T05:53:21.156+05:30Comments on The Fourth Point in a Roller Coaster: The Saturday MorningrUpiEhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05332850380674882564noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6780938908699637884.post-30727267298720493152010-03-01T05:53:21.156+05:302010-03-01T05:53:21.156+05:30i find myself on a page of history....i find myself on a page of history....snehahttp://snehakshirsagar.spaces.live.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6780938908699637884.post-91288017756040409132010-02-02T07:28:46.933+05:302010-02-02T07:28:46.933+05:30loved! i wanna take a desultory walk through Milan...loved! i wanna take a desultory walk through Milan too !!sorcererhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05814195322712707988noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6780938908699637884.post-21248852169396168492010-01-17T09:44:54.990+05:302010-01-17T09:44:54.990+05:30Thanks .
But "the" was intentional .Thanks .<br /><br />But "the" was intentional .rUpiEhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05332850380674882564noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6780938908699637884.post-21296077923779063242010-01-15T11:49:20.033+05:302010-01-15T11:49:20.033+05:30Hey nice poem...excellent imagery...the essence of...Hey nice poem...excellent imagery...the essence of the poem comes out very well, but, i find the tone a tad monotonous...maybe you would want to experiment with the style...do away with 'the' at places maybe - if you like to. <br /><br />Tk care,<br />KrishnaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com